Comments on: Writing 101: Dialogue Mechanics https://writershelpingwriters.net/2025/03/101-dialogue-mechanics/ Helping writers become bestselling authors Fri, 28 Mar 2025 15:10:09 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.7.2 By: V.M. Sang https://writershelpingwriters.net/2025/03/101-dialogue-mechanics/#comment-781322 Fri, 28 Mar 2025 15:10:09 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/?p=58049#comment-781322 An excellent post, Becca.
And thanks for the reminder about paragraphs. I had to give up on a book (book 1 of a series) because the writer confused me greatly by not doing this.

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By: BECCA PUGLISI https://writershelpingwriters.net/2025/03/101-dialogue-mechanics/#comment-781320 Thu, 27 Mar 2025 19:15:07 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/?p=58049#comment-781320 In reply to Henry Kaye.

So glad it was timely (and clear)!

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By: BECCA PUGLISI https://writershelpingwriters.net/2025/03/101-dialogue-mechanics/#comment-781319 Thu, 27 Mar 2025 19:14:52 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/?p=58049#comment-781319 In reply to Toni.

This is an interesting question. In this situation, you wouldn’t use an ellipse because nothing is technically being left out. The sentence indicates that Joan is explaining stuff that’s already happened; just because we don’t see a firsthand account, it doesn’t mean information has been left out. So here, you would just use a period.

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By: Toni https://writershelpingwriters.net/2025/03/101-dialogue-mechanics/#comment-781318 Thu, 27 Mar 2025 18:07:02 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/?p=58049#comment-781318 Thank you for this lesson. I do have a question. Can Eliipses be used to show the character has more speech that has been left out? for example, Joan explained what happened… Because what happened has already been talked about earlier, and Joan is explaining it to someone else.

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By: Henry Kaye https://writershelpingwriters.net/2025/03/101-dialogue-mechanics/#comment-781317 Thu, 27 Mar 2025 17:43:37 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/?p=58049#comment-781317 This is the best explanation I’ve ever heard (read). Thanks

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By: BECCA PUGLISI https://writershelpingwriters.net/2025/03/101-dialogue-mechanics/#comment-781316 Thu, 27 Mar 2025 15:07:32 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/?p=58049#comment-781316 In reply to Hyacinthe M Miller.

Great questions!

Regarding ellipses at the ends of sentences: While some sources (including my beloved English Grammar for Dummies) say an ellipse at the end of a sentence should contain a 4th dot for the period, both the Chicago and AP Manual of Style say to leave it at 3 dots. So that’s what I go with.

Regarding starting with a hyphen to show continuing dialogue after an interruption: treat the person’s broken dialogue as one sentence, and don’t start the continuation with a capital letter.

“Please don’t—”
“Who do you think you are?”
“—speak to me that way,” John continued.

Please is capitalized because it’s the first word in John’s sentence. Speak is actually in the middle of his sentence, so it’s not capitalized.

I don’t know that I’ve seen ellipses used this way, but my guess is that it would be handled the same:

“Please…don’t…”
I waited, but nothing seemed to be forthcoming. “Yes?”
“…speak to me that way,” John continued.

Thanks for bringing these up, Hyacinthe. I can always count on you to raise good questions :).

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By: Hyacinthe M Miller https://writershelpingwriters.net/2025/03/101-dialogue-mechanics/#comment-781315 Thu, 27 Mar 2025 12:57:05 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/?p=58049#comment-781315 Great post, and timely, as I’m editing my second novel. I foresee another helpful thesaurus—a compilation of these tips that anyone can use.

I have a question about punctuation after an ellipsis at the end of a sentence. Should there also be a period, i.e., four dots? And what is your advice about beginning a sentence with an ellipsis or em dash to represent continuing with a broken thought or interruption? Is the first word capitalized?

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