Comments on: Physical Feature Entry: Athletic Build

By: Physical Attribute Entries | Writers Helping Writers

Physical Attribute Entries | Writers Helping Writers — Thu, 10 Oct 2013 23:56:16 +0000

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estetik Burun — Tue, 25 Jun 2013 06:16:57 +0000

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By: Becca Puglisi

Becca Puglisi — Tue, 18 Jun 2013 00:56:41 +0000

Oh, Jack, I can’t believe I left off dancers. Great pick up. 🙂

By: Laura Hebbeln

Laura Hebbeln — Mon, 17 Jun 2013 23:03:29 +0000

I appreciate this post- it is so difficult to describe characters without being list-like or cliched. That is why, in my writing- I either avoid it entirely or try to give hints at characters appearances in subtle ways- how other characters respond to MC, how much difficulty the MC does (or doesn’t have) walking up a flight of steps, food choices the MC makes, etc. This post shed some new light on the topic for me, so thanks again!
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By: C. Lee McKenzie

C. Lee McKenzie — Mon, 17 Jun 2013 17:08:42 +0000

Loved your examples. Excellent.

By: Jack Durish

Jack Durish — Mon, 17 Jun 2013 15:33:31 +0000

I can’t think of a better example of the athletic physique than dancers. With the growing popularity of dancing on American television – Dancing With The Stars and So You Think You Can Dance to name just two popular shows – we are treated to watching some of the finest and fittest athletes in action. Indeed, I remember a story of a professional football coach who invited a choreographer to training camp after watching chorus members sing and dance their way through a Broadway show. The professional football players were soon passed out on the ground attempting to keep up with her.

By: healingbywriting

healingbywriting — Sat, 15 Jun 2013 20:57:18 +0000

The physical traits are always hard to describe well. Thanks for the good advice.

By: Jemi Fraser

Jemi Fraser — Sat, 15 Jun 2013 20:10:29 +0000

Great advice! Love turning those expectations around 🙂