Comments on: Physical Feature Entry: Shoulders https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/ Helping writers become bestselling authors Sun, 04 Oct 2015 19:49:26 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.7.2 By: Leslie S. Rose https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/#comment-14398 Thu, 07 Mar 2013 04:48:09 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/#comment-14398 Never thought of shoulders as an entity like this. I must go do a search for “shrugs.”

]]> By: C. Lee McKenzie https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/#comment-14397 Wed, 06 Mar 2013 18:19:50 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/#comment-14397 Love the list of synonyms. Aren’t we lucky to have so many words that we can choose just the right one we need to create the image we want.

Thanks, Angela

]]> By: M Pax https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/#comment-14395 Tue, 05 Mar 2013 23:09:54 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/#comment-14395 My editor recently pointed out that you don’t need to say shoulders shrug. That the body part need only be named if it’s not shoulders.

Great tips on using shoulders.

]]> By: Karen Lange https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/#comment-14394 Tue, 05 Mar 2013 22:29:16 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/#comment-14394 Good post, thank you! You guys are so good at this, you should write a book! 🙂

]]> By: Kelly Polark https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/#comment-14393 Tue, 05 Mar 2013 21:51:22 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/#comment-14393 Another great post!
Shoulders above the rest! (okay, I couldn’t resist… 😉

]]> By: Misha Gericke https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/#comment-14391 Tue, 05 Mar 2013 17:44:11 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/#comment-14391 Hey again, ladies,

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]]> By: Carrie Butler https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/#comment-14389 Tue, 05 Mar 2013 09:17:43 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/#comment-14389 Oo, I love this one! 🙂

]]> By: Lisa Gail Green https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/#comment-14388 Tue, 05 Mar 2013 05:59:12 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/#comment-14388 I love the idea of describing unusual characteristics like shoulders instead of the usual. Can’t help this though. “rippled shoulders” *snort* te he he. I’m so mature!!

]]> By: Heather https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/#comment-14387 Mon, 04 Mar 2013 23:38:39 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/#comment-14387 This makes me want to describe shoulders better. And I happen to be working on a scene where I can do just that. Thank you!

]]> By: Misha Gericke https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/#comment-14386 Mon, 04 Mar 2013 18:32:30 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/#comment-14386 Excellent post as always. I usually have to go back and replace shrugs with other actions. 😀

]]> By: Martha Ramirez https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/#comment-14385 Mon, 04 Mar 2013 17:55:22 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/#comment-14385 What a great post. You guys always come up with good ones. Thanks Ange and Becca!

]]> By: Theresa Milstein https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/#comment-14383 Mon, 04 Mar 2013 14:09:29 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2013/03/physical-attributes-shoulders/#comment-14383 I remember in the book Holes, Stanley Yelnats often responded by shrugging one shoulder. It was unique, and that probably contributed to his nickname, “Caveman.”

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