Comments on: Conflict Thesaurus Entry: A Delay that Makes One Late https://writershelpingwriters.net/2019/08/conflict-thesaurus-entry-a-delay-that-makes-one-late/ Helping writers become bestselling authors Mon, 16 Sep 2024 17:56:45 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.7.2 By: Top Picks Thursday! For Writers & Readers 08-22-2019 | The Author Chronicles https://writershelpingwriters.net/2019/08/conflict-thesaurus-entry-a-delay-that-makes-one-late/#comment-659757 Thu, 22 Aug 2019 17:02:55 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/?p=35762#comment-659757 […] Dane discusses the key types of conflict while Becca Puglisi zeros in on the specific conflict of a delay that makes your character late, and Vaughn Roycroft examines what makes a good […]

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By: Ren'e Fedyna https://writershelpingwriters.net/2019/08/conflict-thesaurus-entry-a-delay-that-makes-one-late/#comment-659458 Mon, 19 Aug 2019 12:39:25 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/?p=35762#comment-659458 Thanks. What you’re saying makes a lot of sense. I will keep this in mind as I put my characters in tense situations.

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By: ANGELA ACKERMAN https://writershelpingwriters.net/2019/08/conflict-thesaurus-entry-a-delay-that-makes-one-late/#comment-659344 Sun, 18 Aug 2019 16:48:30 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/?p=35762#comment-659344 In reply to Ren’e Fedyna.

I’ll answer for Becca as she’s just getting her house all set up after a move – absolutely there can be too much conflict. Two things will happen if we see conflict piled upon conflict: first, the writing will become episodic (this happens to the character, then this, then this, then this) to the point where it ceases to be believable. The second thing that happens is that it will exhaust the reader and they will shut the book because it’s all too much.

Conflict is an ebb and flow. We want to challenge our characters, but constant challenge is like a car chase that never ends – after a while, we skip ahead to get to something else. So it requires a lot of understanding of what makes good pacing and judgement as to why the conflict is there. Is it pushing the story forward? Helping to reveal new layers of the character? Forcing them to stretch themselves and adapt and change? Or, is it just there for flash? If the latter, it just doesn’t belong.

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By: Ren'e Fedyna https://writershelpingwriters.net/2019/08/conflict-thesaurus-entry-a-delay-that-makes-one-late/#comment-659244 Sat, 17 Aug 2019 13:36:34 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/?p=35762#comment-659244 Hi Becca, thanks so much for your list. I agree with you about the importance of conflict but I wonder if there can be too much conflict. Can a reader get weary of unrelieved high tension, as in a scary movie when from time to time something comical brings some short-lived tension release?

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