Comments on: Occupation Thesaurus Entry: Real Estate Agent https://writershelpingwriters.net/2018/03/occupation-thesaurus-entry-real-estate-agent/ Helping writers become bestselling authors Fri, 28 Jun 2024 17:02:56 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.7.2 By: ANGELA ACKERMAN https://writershelpingwriters.net/2018/03/occupation-thesaurus-entry-real-estate-agent/#comment-589886 Thu, 10 May 2018 16:57:25 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/?p=32736#comment-589886 In reply to Steve.

Ah, I see where the confusion is, and why you are upset. The “Twisting Stereotypes” section is not a real-world judgement of a profession, but rather a judgement on how that profession is stereotyped a certain way in fiction and film. In other words, often in movies, TV shows and fiction, Real Estate Agents are portrayed as pushy and over friendly, which may be true for some real agents, but certainly unfair to paint them all that way. We suggest people not fall into this shortcut because it can be cliche and lazy writing and instead come up with something fresh. This is reinforced in the second paragraph: Characters cast in this role are always well-groomed and articulate. Why not try a character who doesn’t care about what others think of how he or she dresses, but is exceptionally good at what they do, so much so that rumpled clothing or rougher language is overlooked?

To clarify, here’s a section from our main post describing the main fields of the Occupation Thesaurus:

Twisting Stereotypes. In fiction, we can often see characters with a specific job be cast in a stereotypical light (which can be unrepresentative and cliche) to further the plot or act as a characterization short cut. We will offer ways to twist these so you don’t fall into a trap that may do a disservice to your story.”

I can see how this was confusing for you though, so I rephrased the first line to: In fiction and film, Real Estate Agents often seem to come across as a bit pushy and overly friendly, and usually only point out the highlights of the property.

I hope you’ll give me the benefit of the doubt as no offense was meant, and this is certainly no judgement on the profession in the real world. 😉

As for the trademark symbol, yes, I missed that and have corrected it.

I hope this helps shed light on this entry, and our intent.

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By: Steve https://writershelpingwriters.net/2018/03/occupation-thesaurus-entry-real-estate-agent/#comment-589883 Thu, 10 May 2018 16:13:40 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/?p=32736#comment-589883 In reply to ANGELA ACKERMAN.

“Significant research” is not reflected in the fact that you missed that “Realtor” is a trademarked term and not just a synonym for real estate agent.

Also:
“Real Estate Agents always come across as a bit pushy and overly friendly, and usually only point out the highlights of the property. Why not have your character’s ethics and values cause them to be overly honest about the property, even if it means costing a sale?”

-is frankly just insulting. I’ve NEVER known an agent who wasn’t ethical to a fault. An honest agent isn’t a fun twist. It should be the norm. Like a writer that does research.

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By: ANGELA ACKERMAN https://writershelpingwriters.net/2018/03/occupation-thesaurus-entry-real-estate-agent/#comment-589876 Thu, 10 May 2018 14:48:07 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/?p=32736#comment-589876 In reply to Steve.

Hi Steve,

I’m sorry you feel that way. I can tell you I did significant research on this topic, but this is certainly not comprehensive and we always encourage writers do their own research depending on the real-world location they are working in. There will be differences depending on the country/state/province/county where you practice as terminology, educational components, regulations, and the type of real estate being sold all supply different variables. And of course, depending on the age of the character and how long they have been practicing will also create differences as the ecosystem they learned the business is always evolving.

Please, by all means feel free to share your own individual experience so that all writers can get a better handle on this profession. 😉

Best,
Angela

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By: Steve https://writershelpingwriters.net/2018/03/occupation-thesaurus-entry-real-estate-agent/#comment-589873 Thu, 10 May 2018 14:10:28 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/?p=32736#comment-589873 This gets so much wrong about the description of a real estate agent, that I’m not even going to bother with any of the other entries. It’s a good idea, but would really only be useful if you actually did you research, and not just jotted down the stuff you learned from TV.

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By: ANGELA ACKERMAN https://writershelpingwriters.net/2018/03/occupation-thesaurus-entry-real-estate-agent/#comment-584854 Sat, 31 Mar 2018 17:30:07 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/?p=32736#comment-584854 In reply to Erika Hayes.

I love this! I have met ethical realtors and dealt with many unethical ones. When you find a good one you hang onto them and use them house to house to house, because trust is so important with big purchases. Way to be awesome, Erika’s Hubby!

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By: ANGELA ACKERMAN https://writershelpingwriters.net/2018/03/occupation-thesaurus-entry-real-estate-agent/#comment-584853 Sat, 31 Mar 2018 17:28:50 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/?p=32736#comment-584853 In reply to Erika Hayes.

Aw, thank you for the shout out, Erika! So glad you are finding the site helpful!

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By: Erika Hayes https://writershelpingwriters.net/2018/03/occupation-thesaurus-entry-real-estate-agent/#comment-584851 Sat, 31 Mar 2018 17:18:39 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/?p=32736#comment-584851 In reply to Sandra Muller.

have you been to One stop for Writers? There are so many there. It is one of the best sites. I use it almost daily. (It is an extension of this blog)

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By: Erika Hayes https://writershelpingwriters.net/2018/03/occupation-thesaurus-entry-real-estate-agent/#comment-584850 Sat, 31 Mar 2018 17:17:43 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/?p=32736#comment-584850 This entry has me giggling… as my husband is mostly the twist on the stereotype, while his language is not the issue I often say, really you’re wearing that to meet a client? I have also seen him tell people that the home they are wanting to purchase is overpriced and has talked a client out of buying a house just before the bubble popped because he knew it would put them upside down and in financial trouble. The client ended up going through another realtor and bought the house and six months later called my husband to apologize and ask if he could help them … they have since purchased another home through my husband. He knows that people are more important than money, and lives by that. Thanks for the giggle, as I read to him the twist he just smiled and said, he was happy to be a twisted stereotype!

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By: ANGELA ACKERMAN https://writershelpingwriters.net/2018/03/occupation-thesaurus-entry-real-estate-agent/#comment-584114 Thu, 22 Mar 2018 18:22:47 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/?p=32736#comment-584114 In reply to Kelly Blackwell.

Glad this helps! 🙂

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By: ANGELA ACKERMAN https://writershelpingwriters.net/2018/03/occupation-thesaurus-entry-real-estate-agent/#comment-584113 Thu, 22 Mar 2018 18:22:32 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/?p=32736#comment-584113 In reply to Sandra Muller.

If there’s an opportunity to characterize and add depth by choosing one’s type of work carefully, why not, right? 🙂

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By: Sandra Muller https://writershelpingwriters.net/2018/03/occupation-thesaurus-entry-real-estate-agent/#comment-584093 Thu, 22 Mar 2018 14:02:13 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/?p=32736#comment-584093 I love the idea of an occupation Thesaurus! I am always reluctant to write about jobs I have zero knowledge of. I l think the level of detail you’ve gone to is great – very helpful, thank you!

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By: Writing Links 3/19/18 – Where Genres Collide https://writershelpingwriters.net/2018/03/occupation-thesaurus-entry-real-estate-agent/#comment-583788 Mon, 19 Mar 2018 11:02:54 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/?p=32736#comment-583788 […] https://writershelpingwriters.net/2018/03/occupation-thesaurus-entry-real-estate-agent/ “A realtor, or real estate agent, oversees the buying and selling of homes (or properties, commercial or residential). For a seller, they will investigate comparative properties to aid homeowners in setting a price, set up the listing, arrange for pictures and obtain home specs to include in advertisements and website listings, arrange and oversee realtor-only showing and open houses, negotiate between parties (including counter offers), and steer the closing process. Often the realtor will weigh in on any esthetics that may need to be addressed before listing (both decorative adjustments and home repairs – a realtor will be able to tell clients what improvements are worth doing, and which will not offer a return on investment as far as price and ease of sale.)” […]

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