Comments on: Colors, Textures and Shapes Entry: Saw-edged

By: Angela

Angela — Wed, 02 Sep 2009 12:43:39 +0000

Glad it helps, Sara!

By: Sara Jackson

Sara Jackson — Mon, 31 Aug 2009 20:41:37 +0000

Thanks for the info. I often have a hard time describing the five senses through the characters. Sense, for me, are a hard thing to put across in fiction. There are just so many ways to describe the smell of a Thanksgiving dinner, or taste of something bad.

Thank you for the hints.

http://sara-jackson.blogspot.com

By: Nora MacFarlane

Nora MacFarlane — Sun, 30 Aug 2009 19:15:06 +0000

Meatloaf and roadkill... ew.

Loved the post!

By: Angela

Angela — Sun, 30 Aug 2009 04:01:36 +0000

Not sure what’s up with the comments. I think I have a gremlin. But thanks everyone, no matter what post you’re commenting on!

By: Danyelle

Danyelle — Sun, 30 Aug 2009 02:24:49 +0000

Okay. This is odd. I clicked on Diner, but at at Saw-edged. >.< (Which was also lovely.)

I love the way I can almost smell and hear the diner as I read your descriptions. They were fabulous as always! Thanks for the time you devote to helping so many out. :D

By: Vivian

Vivian — Sun, 30 Aug 2009 00:33:08 +0000

I will never look at meatloaf the same way. Great post!

By: MG Higgins

MG Higgins — Fri, 28 Aug 2009 03:30:02 +0000

These are great. Thank you!

By: Mary Witzl

Mary Witzl — Thu, 27 Aug 2009 21:57:50 +0000

I love the image of tents snapping and crackling in the wind. I like the way you show an effective image and a less than ideal one; it really helps me with my revisions.

By: Tara

Tara — Thu, 27 Aug 2009 18:18:38 +0000

Interesting. I like the example you use.

By: PJ Hoover

PJ Hoover — Thu, 27 Aug 2009 15:02:00 +0000

Solo Angela!

this is a great one. Something I don't normally think of but that can leave a lasting impression with the right choice of words!