Comments on: Setting Thesaurus Entry: Teen Bedroom Closet https://writershelpingwriters.net/2009/11/setting-thesaurus-entry-teen-bedroom-closet/ Helping writers become bestselling authors Mon, 23 Oct 2017 14:30:58 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.7.2 By: Mary Witzl https://writershelpingwriters.net/2009/11/setting-thesaurus-entry-teen-bedroom-closet/#comment-2750 Wed, 18 Nov 2009 20:12:05 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2009/11/setting-thesaurus-entry-teen-bedroom-closet/#comment-2750 Ooh — I just saw Kate’s comment. I was pretty sure I wasn’t the only one with sloppy teenagers, but it’s nice to be reassured just the same!

]]> By: Mary Witzl https://writershelpingwriters.net/2009/11/setting-thesaurus-entry-teen-bedroom-closet/#comment-2749 Wed, 18 Nov 2009 20:10:12 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2009/11/setting-thesaurus-entry-teen-bedroom-closet/#comment-2749 Once again, great examples.

Everything is spot on here except for that very first sentence in ‘Sight’: ‘Clothing on hangers…’ Clothing actually ON hangers? I don’t believe mine ever achieved that. And don’t forget the monotonous whine of Mom’s nagging voice!

]]> By: Keri Mikulski https://writershelpingwriters.net/2009/11/setting-thesaurus-entry-teen-bedroom-closet/#comment-2746 Mon, 16 Nov 2009 15:21:52 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2009/11/setting-thesaurus-entry-teen-bedroom-closet/#comment-2746 Good one. 🙂

]]> By: Roni @ FictionGroupie https://writershelpingwriters.net/2009/11/setting-thesaurus-entry-teen-bedroom-closet/#comment-2745 Mon, 16 Nov 2009 03:37:59 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2009/11/setting-thesaurus-entry-teen-bedroom-closet/#comment-2745 This is a great one! My room used to be littered with fallen Teen Beat pin up posters because my mom wouldn’t let me put tacks in the wall, so she made me use that putty stuff and it never held, lol. So my room looked liked it had rained New Kids on the Block. 🙂

]]> By: Erica https://writershelpingwriters.net/2009/11/setting-thesaurus-entry-teen-bedroom-closet/#comment-2744 Mon, 16 Nov 2009 02:13:44 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2009/11/setting-thesaurus-entry-teen-bedroom-closet/#comment-2744 Awesome. I could use this. I’m writing a YA 🙂 Thanks again!

]]> By: Kate https://writershelpingwriters.net/2009/11/setting-thesaurus-entry-teen-bedroom-closet/#comment-2743 Sun, 15 Nov 2009 00:06:54 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2009/11/setting-thesaurus-entry-teen-bedroom-closet/#comment-2743 What did you say? Clothing on hangers? That’s not my teenager’s closet. His clothes are all on the big shelf – the floor.;)

Another good list.

]]> By: Tara McClendon https://writershelpingwriters.net/2009/11/setting-thesaurus-entry-teen-bedroom-closet/#comment-2742 Sat, 14 Nov 2009 20:27:13 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2009/11/setting-thesaurus-entry-teen-bedroom-closet/#comment-2742 Wow. This post reminds me of what my closet used to look like. :] I’d add moth balls to the taste. Or cedar. My mom was always tossing one or the other into my closet. And they both added an odd flavor to the air.

]]> By: Arlene C. Harris https://writershelpingwriters.net/2009/11/setting-thesaurus-entry-teen-bedroom-closet/#comment-2741 Sat, 14 Nov 2009 20:20:14 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2009/11/setting-thesaurus-entry-teen-bedroom-closet/#comment-2741 I am *so* glad I found this blog through Nano… a teenager’s room (including the closet) is actually a plot point and I bookmarked this thing so when I go back into editing, this post is my new BFF to flesh out the descriptives 🙂

Excellent work! Much appreciated.

]]> By: PJ Hoover https://writershelpingwriters.net/2009/11/setting-thesaurus-entry-teen-bedroom-closet/#comment-2739 Sat, 14 Nov 2009 14:43:10 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2009/11/setting-thesaurus-entry-teen-bedroom-closet/#comment-2739 Sweet! You seriously have the best example ever!

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