Comments on: Setting Thesaurus Entry: Coffee House

By: Angela

Angela — Sat, 01 Nov 2008 22:02:00 +0000

I did have a great Halloween, how about you?

You know, just writing up these Setting Thesaurus entries has really helped me think a bit wider of the possibilities of description. I don't just jump at the first think I think of to describe, I tend to root a bit deeper now. I hope it helps you the same way!

By: keri mikulski :)

keri mikulski :) — Sat, 01 Nov 2008 18:57:00 +0000

I need to do this.. I'm constantly stuck with how to say the same thing in a different way with my writing.

Hope you had a great Halloween!

By: Angela

Angela — Sat, 01 Nov 2008 15:04:00 +0000

Thanks Marian! I love coffee too. I could live in one of these places, but I'd have to take out a morgage on my house to afford to drink the specialty coffee all the time...

PJ, the irony is, out of all the Halloween candy my kids collected, there was only one measly Crunchie bar. So not fair!!

But yes I claimed it, and ate it. Muhahahaa.

By: C.R. Evers

C.R. Evers — Sat, 01 Nov 2008 15:03:00 +0000

ahhhh. . . one of my favorite places EVER! :0)

Christy

By: PJ Hoover

PJ Hoover — Sat, 01 Nov 2008 13:48:00 +0000

Hope you gals are enjoying your Halloween treats!
And love the coffee shop. Love coffee.

By: Marian

Marian — Sat, 01 Nov 2008 13:28:00 +0000

Great, now I want one of those chocolate-drizzled whipped cream mocha chocolattes or whatever they’re called.

Thanks for the post. 🙂 Lots of good sensory detail – I felt as though I was right there in the coffee shop. I dread the day you write about a crowded subway or a gynecologist’s examination room.