Comments on: Setting Thesaurus Entry: Subway Station https://writershelpingwriters.net/2008/12/setting-thesaurus-entry-subway-station/ Helping writers become bestselling authors Fri, 14 Oct 2022 17:06:50 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.7.2 By: colbymarshall https://writershelpingwriters.net/2008/12/setting-thesaurus-entry-subway-station/#comment-1443 Tue, 23 Dec 2008 16:14:00 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2008/12/setting-thesaurus-entry-subway-station/#comment-1443 I watched some little boys break dance on the subway once…it was pretty amazing.

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By: Angela https://writershelpingwriters.net/2008/12/setting-thesaurus-entry-subway-station/#comment-1441 Mon, 22 Dec 2008 18:53:00 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2008/12/setting-thesaurus-entry-subway-station/#comment-1441 Becca, ewww. I’ve been wondering about the whole armpit deal, but I never imagine it was a she-pit. Poor Al!

Shana, thanks for giving us your experiences. Here in Calgary we have a train system, but it’s pretty tame compared to the NYC lines. Those rules for riding are very valuable to make the writing authentic.

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By: shanasilver https://writershelpingwriters.net/2008/12/setting-thesaurus-entry-subway-station/#comment-1439 Mon, 22 Dec 2008 16:40:00 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2008/12/setting-thesaurus-entry-subway-station/#comment-1439 I’ve had my share of stories similar to yours, Becca. It’s worse for me because even if I am standing, I am shorter than most passengers. I can’t even reach the highest handrail. And I’ve learned to hold my nose when walking through the platforms earlier in the morning to avoid the homeless stench I will inevitably find.

I have worse stories of crowded subways, one that had me crying and distraught by the time I got to work.

In defense of NYC though, not all subways or passengers are like that. The 6 train is usually clean and delightful. My path train from NJ into the city is always safe, even if you ride alone late at night. If you live here, you get to know which lines are worse than others and which to avoid. For example, I will avoid the E train at all costs, but the V which runs on the same line for some stops is awesome.

I do have rules to follow though.
-Never make eye contact
-Keep your headphones on so people know not to speak with you
-Don’t touch the railings with your bare hands, and if you do, wash them after riding. Seriously.
-Don’t stand too close to the platform edge, there are some crazy people out there and too many stories of innocents being pushed to ignore
-Don’t go into an empty car (if it’s not the first stop on the line). There’s usually a reason it’s empty, and you don’t want to be caught in there alone if someone less than desireable enters

If I think of more, I will post it.

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By: Becca https://writershelpingwriters.net/2008/12/setting-thesaurus-entry-subway-station/#comment-1436 Mon, 22 Dec 2008 02:19:00 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2008/12/setting-thesaurus-entry-subway-station/#comment-1436 How could we have forgotten the rats???

As for the story, we were in New York on our honeymoon. The train was really crowded, but we were able to cram together on the seat rather than standing. It seemed like a great arrangement until a rather large woman grabbed the nearest hand-rail, which happened to be just above Al’s head. His face was pretty much in her armpit, which hadn’t been shaved in quite some time. He was trying to figure out how to extricate himself from the situation without breathing and without getting us both killed–you know how it is in New York. I was no help, since I had already pretty much fallen off my seat laughing.

It was shocking, how many NYC subway stereotypes were proven true on that day…

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By: shanasilver https://writershelpingwriters.net/2008/12/setting-thesaurus-entry-subway-station/#comment-1433 Sun, 21 Dec 2008 20:20:00 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2008/12/setting-thesaurus-entry-subway-station/#comment-1433 Yes, NYC is full of many goodies that other cities don’t have. Don’t be too jealous of our rat population, now.

Good things do come of rats in subways. For example, KIKI STRIKE by Kristen Miller would have lacked some very cool showdowns if rats stayed away from underground tunnels.

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By: Angela https://writershelpingwriters.net/2008/12/setting-thesaurus-entry-subway-station/#comment-1432 Sun, 21 Dec 2008 15:18:00 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2008/12/setting-thesaurus-entry-subway-station/#comment-1432 Shana–Rats! Yikes, you’re right. Luckily, rats don’t live up here in my corner of Canada.

Thanks PJ–glad it helps!

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By: PJ Hoover https://writershelpingwriters.net/2008/12/setting-thesaurus-entry-subway-station/#comment-1429 Sun, 21 Dec 2008 05:36:00 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2008/12/setting-thesaurus-entry-subway-station/#comment-1429 Great (and useful) location! I have a subway station in one of my WIPs!
Thanks!

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By: shanasilver https://writershelpingwriters.net/2008/12/setting-thesaurus-entry-subway-station/#comment-1428 Sun, 21 Dec 2008 04:29:00 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2008/12/setting-thesaurus-entry-subway-station/#comment-1428 You forgot the rats! Often while I’m waiting on the platform, a bit of movement on the track will catch my eye, and yep. Rat.

I have worse stories than this that I will refrain from sharing. Just don’t go in the subway at night, that’s all I’m saying.

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By: Angela https://writershelpingwriters.net/2008/12/setting-thesaurus-entry-subway-station/#comment-1427 Sat, 20 Dec 2008 22:45:00 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2008/12/setting-thesaurus-entry-subway-station/#comment-1427 Thanks Marian. I feel so bad for the homeless this time of year, especially with the freezing temperatures we’ve been having. I hope they’ve made it into a shelter…

Becca, no WAY are we letting you off the hook without spilling that story!

*taps foot*

Well?

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By: Becca https://writershelpingwriters.net/2008/12/setting-thesaurus-entry-subway-station/#comment-1426 Sat, 20 Dec 2008 20:55:00 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2008/12/setting-thesaurus-entry-subway-station/#comment-1426 I have a really funny subway story that involves my husband, a really hairy armpit, and the worst b.o. EVER. Lol.

Husband didn’t think it was funny, but it totally was…

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By: Marian https://writershelpingwriters.net/2008/12/setting-thesaurus-entry-subway-station/#comment-1424 Sat, 20 Dec 2008 16:26:00 +0000 https://writershelpingwriters.net/2008/12/setting-thesaurus-entry-subway-station/#comment-1424 “crazy people talking to themselves or ranting at the crowds”

Or begging for money. I always feel guilty when they do that – especially this one homeless woman who wasn’t even wearing shoes.

And the #1 type of paper litter after newspapers seems to be religious pamphlets. I see those a lot on subways in Toronto.

Thanks for the post!

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